Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What can be a sport that you can be interested in?
-> Acturally, I don\'t like sports and I\'m not interested in sports.
However, not exercising as I get older is not very good for my health, so I\'m trying to take a walk with my husband or ride an indoor bike as an exercise.
Walking to the Han River when the weather is nice seems to be the most interesting exercise.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Bo Im!
We might have touched this topic before and I can remember you saying all of these things too. I agree that physical activities are vital to our health and we need to take them seriously or suffer in the future.
Anyway, thank you very much for this homework answer. I will see you earlier in class tonight!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Actually...
However, not exercising as I get older is not very good for my health, so I\'m trying to take a walk with my husband or ride an indoor bike as an exercise.
>> Correct!
Walking to the Han River when the weather is nice seems to be the most interesting exercise.
Walking to the Han River when the weather is nice seems to be the most interesting exercise.
>> Correct!
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