homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to advise a busy person not to spend too much time on work.
This is because work is important, but your break time is also important.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jessica!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I want to advise a busy person not to spend too much time on work.
>> CORRECT!
This is because work is important, but your break time is also important.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> Work is important, but your break time is also important.
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