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2012-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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I always thank you kind teacher.// Sunday I met my friend. we gone to a hot-springs resort. we very much eaten on the way to hot springs resort. But after hot springs resort, we were repeat getting hungry. so we went to buffer restaurant. yesterday all day we olny eat.

강사 첨삭

Ola Lisa! It\'s my pleasure to be your teacher.  I also want to thank you for always doing your homework. I believe this will really help you to develop your English communication skills. Keep it up my dear! See you later in our class. ~T. Lorraine   I made some corrections in your letter. Please take a look and study: I always thank you kind teacher. >> Correct! Thank you for that. :) Sunday I met my friend. >> Last Sunday, I met my fried. (Missing word) we gone to a hot-springs resort. >> We went to a hot-spring resort. (Sentence Construction) we very much eaten on the way to hot springs resort. > We ate while we\'re on our way to the hot spring resort. (Sentence Construction) But after hot springs resort, we were repeat getting hungry. so we went to buffer restaurant. >> But after having a good time in the resort, we were hungry again so went to a buffet restaurant to eat. (Sentence Construction, Spelling) yesterday all day we olny eat. >> The whole day yesterday, we just ate. (Sentence Construction)

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