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2022-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Are fusion-food restaurants famous in Korea? What type of food do you think is popular these days? Fusion food is the most common in Korea. When they sell food, they call it its original food, and they sell Mexican and Indian food including a mix of Korean food. Most Koreans get to eat fusion food, but they believe the food is original food. LOL. So when I go to another country, I am very surprised by the different tastes. For example, while Vietnamese Pho Noodles are still popular among Korean people, I found out that they are mixed Korean Pho Noodles, not original Vietnamese Pho Noodles. I\'ve never been to Vietnam, but I want to go there someday and try the original. LOL.

강사 첨삭

Hello Lisa,

Here is a thought that you may ponder on:

\"The object of education is to prepare the young to educate themselves throughout their lives.

In our daily activities, we can learn new things.

Preparing yourself with all the challenges in life is just a trial for you to move forward.

In this way, you will find yourself, knowing that you\'ve learn a lot.\"

T. Jeny


Are fusion-food restaurants famous in Korea? 
>>correct
What type of food do you think is popular these days?
>>correct
Fusion food is the most common in Korea. 
>>correct
When they sell food, they call it its original food, and they sell Mexican and Indian food, including a mix of Korean food. 
>>correct
Most Koreans get to eat fusion food, but they believe the food is original food. LOL.
>>correct
 So when I go to another country, I am very surprised by the different tastes. 
>>correct
For example, while Vietnamese Pho Noodles are still popular among Korean people, I found out that they are mixed Korean Pho Noodles, not original Vietnamese Pho Noodles.
>>correct
 I\'ve never been to Vietnam, but I want to go there someday and try the original. LOL.
>>correct

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