homework
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Kindly answer the following in essay form.
Have you ever felt discrimination from other people before? How should we deal with it?
I don\'t have ever felt discrimination. But I sometimes look discrimination on the media. There are many type of discrimination like gender, regional, racial etc. I think there is no reason to discriminate against individual characteristics. So we don\'t have to have a negative look at other people\'s characteristics. We must admit that each person is different.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
At some point in our lives, we can feel discrimination from other people but there is always a good way to properly handle it. These things should not affect us in a negative way but let it be something positive that can motivate us to become better people.
I don\'t have ever felt discrimination.
>> I have never felt discrimination before but sometimes I see it through media.
But I sometimes look discrimination on the media.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
There are many type of discrimination like gender, regional, racial etc.
>> There are many types of discrimination according to like gender, religion, race and many more.
I think there is no reason to discriminate against individual characteristics.
>> I think there is no reason to discriminate an individual\'s characteristics.
So we don\'t have to have a negative look at other people\'s characteristics.
>> So we don\'t need to look down on them.
We must admit that each person is different.
>> We must understand that each person is different and we have to accept that.
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