homework
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Which one do you think is better, living alone or with someone? Explain your answer.
I think living with someone is better than alone. When I was freshman, I lived alone in the rented room. I had thought that living alone is free and comfortable, but actually I felt lonely and empty. Also I had to do all the housework and cook what I was going to eat. But I have to live alone when the semester start. Because It\'s too far from my home to university. If the distance between my home and university is closer, I will not live alone.
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Hi [이름]:)
Having company in our house really is very comforting. You can have another person that can help you in every step of the way. :)
I think living with someone is better than alone.
>> I think living with someone is better than living alone.
When I was freshman, I lived alone in the rented room.
>> When I was freshman, I lived alone in a rented room.
I had thought that living alone is free and comfortable, but actually I felt lonely and empty.
>> I thought that living alone is liberating and comfortable, but actually I felt lonely and empty.
Also I had to do all the housework and cook what I was going to eat.
>> Also, I had to do all the housework and cook for myself.
But I have to live alone when the semester start.
>> But I needed to live alone when the semester started because my university was too far from my house.
Because It\'s too far from my home to university.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
If the distance between my home and university is closer, I will not live alone.
>> CORRECT
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