homework

2012-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

homework is difficult, but this is interest. austere : My father is not austere. My father is man of snetiment. so I love father and admire his. spruce : I like handsome boy. but if boy is not spruce, l hate his. comedienne : I think this is great commedience. if l was commedience, i don't do it. because it is very difficult job.

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HI!! How are you? I hope you\'re doing fine. I hope you had a great day!Thank you for sending me your composition! Great Job! T.Lorraine homework is difficult, but this is interest. >>The homework was difficult, but it was interesting.austere : My father is not austere. My father is man of snetiment. so I love father and admire his. >>My father is not an austere person,he is actually a man of sentiment. That\'s why I love my father and I admire him.spruce : I like handsome boy. but if boy is not spruce, l hate his. >>I like handsome boys.but if the boy is not spruce I don\'t like him.comedienne : I think this is great commedience. if l was commedience, i don\'t do it. because it is very difficult job. >>I think being a commedienne is great but I don\'t like it to be my job because it\'s difficult.

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