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Yes. But I dont really think I like that. It\'s because when I do this job, then I will be stressed because not a lot or relax than before.
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Hi David,
Thank you for answering your homework..
Yes, the profession of acting is hard. It\'s one of the most competitive professions in the world. Most actors live a combination of both lives, which can also be tough. The oscillation can be draining too so becoming a movie actor is a stressful job. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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Yes. But I dont really think I like that. It\'s because when I do this job, then I will be stressed because not a lot or relax than before.
>>Yes. But I don\'t really think I like that to become a movie star because becoming a movie star is a kind of stressful job for me then I will be very stressed. And I\'m not feeling very relaxed compared to before when I become a movie star.
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Yes. But I dont really think I like that. It\'s because when I do this job, then I will be stressed because not a lot or relax than before.
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