homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Kindly answer the following in essay form.
What is your favorite tradition in South Korea? Explain your answer.
My favorite tradition is New Year\'s cash gifts. It is that if I perform the new year\'s bow to elder, they give me some money and advice.
In this process, We wish that this year will be happy to each other. Also I can express respect to them. And this is an opportunity I can
receive a lot of money. So after seollal, I always buy something I want to buy.
강사 첨삭
Hi John:)
Yes, I think this tradition is very common in Asian countries. We also have something very similar. hehehe!
My favorite tradition is New Year\'s cash gifts.
>> My favorite tradition is giving cash to children during Seollal.
It is that if I perform the new year\'s bow to elder, they give me some money and advice.
>> Children usually bow to the elderly people and the receive money and advice afterwards.
In this process, We wish that this year will be happy to each other.
>> In this process, we wish that this year will be filled with happiness.
Also I can express respect to them.
>> Also, ii can show my respect towards them.
And this is an opportunity I canreceive a lot of money.
>> I can also receive a lot of money through this.
So after seollal, I always buy something I want to buy.
>> So after Seollal, I always buy the things that I want.
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