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I think there will be no big change. But when it\'s dog, then people will look more cute. Plants can not move so people will not look cute.
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Hi David,
Plants provide our food, materials for shelter, fuel to warm us and replenish the air we breathe. Plants provide food for animals and a habitat for wildlife. Animals both large and small are a critical component of our environment. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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I think there will be no big change. But when it\'s dog, then people will look more cute. Plants can not move so people will not look cute.
>> I think there will be no big change. But when people have a pet like a dog they will look cuter. And plants can not move so people will not look cute but people will survive because plants and animals provide food to people.
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I think there will be no big change. But when it\'s dog, then people will look more cute. Plants can not move so people will not look cute.
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