homework!

Do you have plans on having an apartment of your own? Where do you want your apartment? What will the apartment look like? I don't have a plan on having an apartment of mine. I live in my parent's house. I am my overshadowed by parents. My parents dosen't like that I live alone independently except wedding. If I have a apartment, I'm have a new house near the school. because, My university school is very far from my house. It's about an two hours. I usualy take the bus to the subway station. If I want Ican live domitory. But I don't like live dorm. It is hard to go school for me.I had take a lot of material for my class. (Art material comprise paint, brushes, and canvas...etc) My friend, jin envy that school is her own backyard. In the future, I'll have a my house. And, I want to decorate the house beautifully. But for now at least the clean up my room.(haha~) And cook smoothies for my mom.

Hello Mary, Thank you for doing your homework. I'll see you later. T.Faye Here are  your corrections: Do you have plans on having an apartment of your own? Where do you want your apartment? What will the apartment look like?I don\'t have a plan on having an apartment of mine. >>I have no plans in having my own apartment.I live in my parent\'s house. >>Correct! >>I live with my parents. I am my overshadowed by parents. >>I am overshadowed by my parents.My parents dosen\'t like that I live alone independently except wedding. >>My parents don't like me to live independently except when I am married.If I have a apartment, I\'m have a new house near the school. because, My university school is very far from my house. >>If I will have an apartment of my own, I would like it to be near the school because right now, my house is far from my school.It\'s about an two hours. >>It's about two hours away. I usualy take the bus to the subway station. >>Correct!If I want Ican live domitory. But I don\'t like live dorm. >>If I want, I can live in the dormitory but I don't like it there.It is hard to go school for me.I had take a lot of material for my class. (Art material comprise paint, brushes, and canvas...etc) >>It is hard to go to school especially when I bring a lot of materials for school. (Art material comprise paint, brushes, and canvas...etc)My friend, jin envy that school is her own backyard. >>I envy my friend, Jin, because her house is at the back of the school.In the future, I\'ll have a my house. >>In the future, I will have my own house.And, I want to decorate the house beautifully. >>Correct!But for now at least the clean up my room.(haha~) >>But for now I will just hanle cleaning my room.And cook smoothies for my mom. >>Correct!