homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Kindly answer the following in essay form.
What kind of celebration would you like for your birthday?
I just want to eat out with my family and eat my favorite food like beef stake and pasta. And then, I\'d like to eat some cake. Also I want to be celebrated from my friends. They always send me some celebrative messages and gifts. Every birthday has been very good for me from first to last.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
That sounds like a fun birthday party!
I just want to eat out with my family and eat my favorite food like beef stake and pasta.
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And then, I\'d like to eat some cake.
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Also I want to be celebrated from my friends.
>> I also want to celebrate with my friends.
They always send me some celebrative messages and gifts.
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Every birthday has been very good for me from first to last.
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