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학생이 쓴 원문
1) long- longer- longest
2) bad- worse- worst
3) modern -more modern- most modern
4) nice-nicer- nicest
5) near-nearer-nearest
6) flat-flatter-flattest
7) popular- more popular- most popular
8) happy- happier-happiest
9) many more most
10) clever- cleverer- cleverest
I went to Yong-Gung-Sa last Sunday.
Yong-Gung-sa is Budda's temple located by the seashore.
Usally, Budda's temples are located deep in the mountain.
There is the reason of history.
In Joseon Dynasty peiod, The Buddhism was very popular.
But The king didn't like it.
The king oppressed the Budahism and encouraged the Confucianism.
Finally, Budda's temples have been evicted in the mountain.
This is the reason that mostly temples are in mountain.
So Yong-Gung-Sa is a special temple.
I like walking in the temple at dawn.
It's very silence and I can meditate deeply.
I wanted to meditate there. but there were many people.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework today..:)
Job well done my dear and I commend you for that!^^
Keep up the good work Miss. [Name]!
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1) long- longer- longest
>>correct2) bad- worse- worst >>correct3) modern -more modern- most modern
>>correct4) nice-nicer- nicest
>>correct5) near-nearer-nearest
>>correct6) flat-flatter-flattest
>>correct7) popular- more popular- most popular>>correct8) happy- happier-happiest
>>correct9) many more most
>>correct10) clever- cleverer- cleverest
>>correctI went to Yong-Gung-Sa last Sunday.
>>correctYong-Gung-sa is Budda\'s temple located by the seashore.
>>Yong -Gung- sa is a Buddha\'s temple by the shore.Usally, Budda\'s temples are located deep in the mountain.
>>correctThere is the reason of history.
>>It has something to do with our history.In Joseon Dynasty peiod, The Buddhism was very popular.>>In Jeoson Dynasty, Buddhism was very popular.
But The king didn\'t like it.
>>correctThe king oppressed the Budahism and encouraged the Confucianism.
>>The king oppressed buddhism and encouraged Confucianism.Finally, Budda\'s temples have been evicted in the mountain.
>>correctThis is the reason that mostly temples are in mountain.
>>This is the reason why most temples are in the mountain.So Yong-Gung-Sa is a special temple.
>>correctI like walking in the temple at dawn.
>>correctIt\'s very silence and I can meditate deeply.
>>It\'s very silent and I can meditate deeply.I wanted to meditate there. but there were many people.
>>correct
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