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2022-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I think that\'s right Because food chains exist everywhere. If sharks disappear, fish and species that feed on sharks will continue to live. If a particular species of fish continues to live, there will be a shortage of food for that species. Eventually, many fish species may disappear together.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ji [이름]! 
That\'s right and we might not be able to enjoy sea creatures. 
Thank you! 

I think that\'s right. 
>>> CORRECT!
Because food chains exist everywhere.
>>> CORRECT!
If sharks disappear, fish and species that feed on sharks will continue to live.
>>> If sharks disappear, fish and other species that feed on sharks will continue to live.
If a particular species of fish continues to live, there will be a shortage of food for that species.
>>> CORRECT!
Eventually, many fish species may disappear together.
>>> CORRECT!

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