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2022-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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1. My car has a radio and a CD player. 2. Sharon neither listens to rap music, or heavy metal. 3. Carol wanted to drive to Colorado, and Bill insisted that use a plane. 4. I’m afraid of heights, but I appreciate the view from the top of this building. 5. I have to be on time, because my boss will be annoyed if I’m late. 6. Do you like chocolates nor is vanilla ice cream better? 7. I have to go to work at six, so I’m waking up at four. 8. I was on time, but everyone else was late. 9. Nadia doesn’t like to drive, therefore she takes the car everywhere. 10. Our trip to the museum was interesting, for there were several new artifacts on display.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. You really are such a great student. Continue studying and you will learn a lot. ^_^
T. Irene
1. My car has a radio and a CD player.
>>> Correct.
2. Sharon neither listens to rap music, or heavy metal.
>>> Sharon neither listens to rap music, nor heavy metal.
3. Carol wanted to drive to Colorado, and Bill insisted that use a plane.
>>> Carol wanted to drive to Colorado, but Bill insisted that they use a plane.
4. I’m afraid of heights, but I appreciate the view from the top of this building.
>>> Correct.
5. I have to be on time, because my boss will be annoyed if I’m late.
>>> Correct.
6. Do you like chocolates nor is vanilla ice cream better?
>>> Do you like chocolates or is vanilla ice cream better?
7. I have to go to work at six, so I’m waking up at four.
>>> Correct.
8. I was on time, but everyone else was late.
>>> Correct.
9. Nadia doesn’t like to drive, therefore she takes the car everywhere.
>>> Nadia doesn’t like to drive, but she takes the car everywhere.
10. Our trip to the museum was interesting, for there were several new artifacts on display.
>>> Correct. 













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