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Actually, I’m not interested with dinosaurs.
I have not never heard of a dinosaur called the Brontosaurus.
When I was child, I like Jurassic park series.
Tyrannosaurus in movie, cute and wonderful.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ju,
I have not never heard of a dinosaur called the Brontosaurus.
When I was child, I like Jurassic park series.
>> When I was a child, I like the Jurassic Park movies.
I also don\'t have a lot of ideas about dinosaurs. It\'s amazing that children can even name many dinosaurs. I am even having hard time naming and pronouncing their names.
I am scared of the ocean so I guess Mosasaurus is the scariest dinosaur. I can\'t imagine swimming nor being on a ship thinking that this creature is under the water.
Teacher Andrea
Actually, I’m not interested with dinosaurs.
>> Correct
I have not never heard of a dinosaur called the Brontosaurus.
>> I only heard of a dinosaur called Brontosaurus.
When I was child, I like Jurassic park series.
>> When I was a child, I like the Jurassic Park movies.
Tyrannosaurus in movie, cute and wonderful.
>> Tyrannosaurus Rex in movie is cute and wonderful.
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