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I think they are very destructive. Thy kill them selves, they also trash things. People are very bad. Some are not but we need to try being a good person.
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Hi David,
Thank you for making an essay about your homework.
Humans impact the physical environment in many ways for example overpopulation, pollution, burning fossil fuels, and deforestation. Changes like these have triggered climate change, soil erosion, poor air quality, and undrinkable water. Protect our environment. ~ Teacher QUENNY...:)
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I think they are very destructive.
>> I think humans are very destructive to our environment.
Thy kill them selves, they also trash things.
>> They kill themselves because they trash things anywhere and they don\'t know how to protect our environment.
People are very bad.
>> People are very bad to the environment.
Some are not but we need to try being a good person.
>> Some are not but we need to try being good people.
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I think they are very destructive. Thy kill them selves, they also trash things. People are very bad. Some are not but we need to try being a good person.
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