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2022-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I applied for the course for 6 months. But I was sick and could not contiue. So I had to stop. I didn\'t try to stop for a long time, but I took 7 months off. I think I\'ll finish it. There is still the remaining days.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Ms. [Name] [이름]!
I am glad that you were able to come back and continue your studies. It\'s really nice to speak with you but I would agree with what you have said that you forgot most of your vocabulary words. Well, it\'s not too late to learn again. I\'ll call you tomorrow :)
Aki~
I applied for the course for 6 months. But I was sick and could not contiue. 
>>> I applied for this course for sic months but I got sick and I was not able to continue studying.
So I had to stop.
>>> CORRECT! 
OR >>> So I needed to take a break.
I didn\'t try to stop for a long time, but I took 7 months off. 
>>> I wasn\'t planning to stop for a long time but it took me 7 months to rest.
I think I\'ll finish it. 
>>> CORRECT! 
OR >> I guess i would be able to finish it.
There is still the remaining days.
>>> There are still some remaining days for this course.

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