Homework
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I got all the toys I wanted when I was a kid
so nothing special
I wanted a dog but couldn\'t
Because I have a fur allergy and I was too young to take responsibility for my dog\'s life.
But I still want it
강사 첨삭
Homework\'s here Ji [이름]!
It would be difficult on your part to have a dog, when you have an allergy.
Maybe you should consider having other animals without a fur?
I got all the toys I wanted when I was a kid
so nothing special
>>> I had all the toys I wanted when I was young, so there\'s nothing special.
I wanted a dog but couldn\'t
>>> I wanted to have a dog, but I couldn\'t.
Because I have a fur allergy and I was too young to take responsibility for my dog\'s life.
>>> Because I am allergic to fur and I was too young to take responsibility for my dog\'s life.
But I still want it.
>>> CORRECT!
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