Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to watch a movie called \'My Candle\'.
That movie is a documentary movie. It was showed a few days ago. After watching the advertisement, I want to watch the movie.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Ms. [Name] [이름]!
I have to repeat this question to your homework because I am curious why do you want to watch this movie. Anyway, thank you for gving me a response. Have a great day!
Aki~
I want to watch a movie called \'My Candle\'.
>>>> I want to watch \"My Candle\"
That movie is a documentary movie.
That movie is a documentary movie.
>>>> Correct
Or >>> It is a documentary movie.
It was showed a few days ago.
>>>> It has been shown a few days ago.
After watching the advertisement, I want to watch the movie.
>>>> After watching the trailer, I also want to see the movie.
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