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My long-term goal is to be good at English writing and speaking, and my short-term goal is to write the Old and New Testament in the English Bible.
When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
I am the best time for me to eat withzmy family and to play the flute with my friends.
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Good afternoon Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Great job for expressing your mind through writing. Be encouraged and motivated writing your thoughts in linger sentences .
Take care!
Aki~
My long-term goal is to be good at English writing and speaking, and my short-term goal is to write the Old and New Testament in the English Bible.
>>> My long-term goal is to be good at wriitng and speaking English and my short term-goal is to transcribe the Old and New Testament in the English bible.
When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
>>> Correct!
I am the best time for me to eat withzmy family and to play the flute with my friends.
>>> The best time for me is having a meal and playing flute with my friends.
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