homework
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What is that one thing that you will not change about yourself and why?
I think everything will be changed. and i can not ensure the change in the future.
I just believe my hair will not change. i had dream before that i had hair loss. after that dream, my feeling was really bad during all day.
About the personality , i think i should change to better one. i\'m not live alone. i always live with co-workers or family.
강사 첨삭
Hi Logan:)
Yes, change is inevitable. It\'s the only thing that is constant in our lives. We just have to adapt to it.
PS: Your dream made me laugh. Hahaha!
I think everything will be changed. and i can not ensure the change in the future.
>> I think everything will change and we can\'t ensure the changes in the future.
>> I think everything will change and we can\'t ensure the changes in the future.
I just believe my hair will not change.
>> I just believe that my hair will not change.
i had dream before that i had hair loss.
>> I had a dream before that I lost all of my hair.
after that dream, my feeling was really bad during all day.
>> After that, I felt really bad the entire day.
>> After that, I felt really bad the entire day.
About the personality , i think i should change to better one.
>> About my personality, I think I should change it to a better one.
i\'m not live alone.
>> I don\'t live alone.
i always live with co-workers or family.
>> I always live with my co-worker and family.
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