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Should parents help their children plan their future?
I think their parents should help when they ask for help about their future . Because they are trying to fefer to their parents\' experience.
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Good afternoon Ms. [Name] [이름]!
I agree with you, parents can help their children plan for their future because one of their roles is to guide them. Thank you for your homework. Take care!
Aki~
I think their parents should help when they ask for help about their future .
>>> I think parents should help if they were asked to.
>>> I think parents should help when they were asked about their future.
Because they are trying to fefer to their parents\' experience
>>> Because they are trying to refer from their parents\' experience.
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