Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What springs to your mind when you hear the word ice cream?
It reminds me a summer.
And I remember that I was happy when I eat ice cream after swimming when I was young.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ju!^^
And I remember that I was happy when I eat ice cream after swimming when I was young.
The word that comes to my minds is also summer.
My favorite flavor is vanilla.
It\'s simples, sweet, and just perfection.
Teacher Andrea
It reminds me a summer.
>> Correct
And I remember that I was happy when I eat ice cream after swimming when I was young.
>> I remember when I was young, I felt happy when I eat ice cream after swimming lessons .
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