Homework
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If you had a lot of money, what is the first thing you\'ll buy and why?
If i have a lot of money, i\'ll first buy the buildings.
because i want to have to the building.
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Hi [이름]:)
That\'s a great purchase. Imagine the different activities you can do there with your family and friends, right?
If i have a lot of money, i\'ll first buy the buildings.
>> If I have a lot of money, I\'ll buy my first building.
because i want to have to the building.
>> It is because I want to have my own building.
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