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2022-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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How can we uniquely show our love towards other people? We can uniquely show our love when we prepare a surprise event. For example, if it\'s our love\'s birthday, we can reserve a luxurious hotel without her knowing. It is more romantic than just having dinner with love.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jessica:)

That sounds so romantic. Surprises are always great. It makes us feel loved. That\'s a great choice!

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We can uniquely show our love when we prepare a surprise event.

>> We can uniquely show our love by preparing a surprise event.

For example, if it\'s our love\'s birthday, we can reserve a luxurious hotelwithout her knowing.

>> For example, if it\'s our loved one\'s birthday, we can reserve a luxurious hotel without him/her knowing.

It is more romantic than just having dinner with love.

>>It is more romantic than just having dinner with them.

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