homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you feel and what do you do after a long vacation? Explain your answer in detail.
A long vacation makes me energetic. I can rest enough time during my vacation. So It is very helpful for me to hard study.
I will go to my university and study hard my major electronic engineering and speaking English. Also I will participate in idea contest related to coding. If COVID-19 ends, I will travel to another country.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jessica:)
Vacations really refreshes our minds. It relaxes us which makes us more active afterwards. We tend to be more productive then. :)
A long vacation makes me energetic.
>> CORRECT
I can rest enough time during my vacation.
>> I can rest for enough time during my vacation.
So It is very helpful for me to hard study.
>> So, it is very helpful for me to study hard.
I will go to my university and study hard my major electronic engineering and speaking English.
>> I will go to my university and study hard about my major, which is electronic engineering, and English as well.
Also I will participate in idea contest related to coding.
>> I will also participate in idea contests related to coding.
If COVID-19 ends, I will travel to another country.
>> If the pandemic end, I will travel to another country.
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