HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY QUESTION: What is more important to take care of: mental health or physical health? Why?
ANSWER :
Both are important for a healthy life.
I think balance is important for mental health or physical health.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
Both are important for a healthy life.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> Both are important for a healthy lifestyle.
I think balance is important for health or physical health.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I think having balanced mental and physical health is important.
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