homework
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Thank you for tis Lisa. My condolences to you and the family. Be strong and I know you know that Jehova is our comforter.
We can hug them, stay with them, and pray for them, not just words of comfort.
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The most important thing is to feel the situation as if it were mine. (Emotional consent)
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We can also comfort people with the words of the Bible.Because the Bible has the reasons about our suffering and the message of hope for the future.
>>> OR: We can also comfort people with the words of the Bible because the Bible contains the reasons about our suffering and the message of hope for the future.
Jehovah wants us to be reassured and hopeful. And we can be comforted because He is an absolute keeper of promises.
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>>> OR: Jehovah wants us to be reassured and hopeful then we can be comforted because He is an absolute keeper of promises.
This is from the Article.
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JESUS CHRIST said: “My food is for me to do the will of him that sent me and to finish his work.”
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(John 4:34) In carrying out his God-given assignment, Jesus reflected his Father’s magnificent qualities.
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Among these is Jehovah’s great love for people.
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(1 John 4:7-10) The apostle Paul noted one manifestation of that love when he described Jehovah as “the God of all comfort.”
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(2 Cor. 1:3) Jesus demonstrated such love when he did what was foretold in Isaiah’s prophecy.
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(Read Isaiah 61:1, 2.) Jesus read from that prophecy in the synagogue at Nazareth and applied its words to himself.
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(Luke 4:16-21) During his entire ministry, Jesus lovingly comforted mourning ones, bringing them encouragement and peace of mind.
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All followers of Jesus need to imitate him by comforting those who mourn.
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(1 Cor. 11:1) Paul said: “Keep comforting one another and building one another up.”
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(1 Thess. 5:11) Especially do we need to comfort others, since mankind now faces “critical times hard to deal with.”
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(2 Tim. 3:1) More and more, honest-hearted people throughout the world are being confronted by some whose words and actions cause grief, heartache, and sadness.
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