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2022-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I like jazz music the most 2. That girls are offensive since before 3. my dog\'s name is jumbo 4. My youth has only beautiful memories 5. I watched a movie called Jurassic Park with my friend yesterday.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ji [이름]! 
Make sure to end your sentences with the correct punctuation. 
It\'s very important, since we are practicing your writing skills. 
1. I like jazz music the most. 
>>> CORRECT!
2. That girls are offensive since before. 
>>> The girls have been offensive for a long time. 
3. my dog\'s name is jumbo. 
>>> My dog\'s name is jumbo. 
4. My youth has only beautiful memories. 
>>> CORRECT!
5. I watched a movie called Jurassic Park with my friend yesterday.
>>> CORRECT!

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