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2022-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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The best invention I think is a smartphone.The reason is that there are so many things you can do on your phone, such as shopping, games, and cell phones.

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Hi [이름]:)

That\'s true! Smartphones are great inventions. They make our lives more convenient. :)

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The best invention I think is a smartphone.

>>I think the best inventions are smartphones.

The reason is that there are so many things you can do on your phone, such as shopping, games, and cell phones.

>> The reason is that there are so many things you can do on your phone such as shopping, playing games and many more.

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