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You asked me where I would go for a picnic, I think I would go to the mountain. I don\'t like places with water.
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Hello there Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Do you have a bad experience with water? It could be a factor why some people do not like being near to any bodies of water.
Take care :)
Aki
You asked me where I would go for a picnic, I think I would go to the mountain.
>>> Correct!
OR >> You asked me where do I want to have a picnic? I I think I prefer going to the mountain
I don\'t like places with water.
>>> Correct!
OR >> Because I don\'t like going to places near water.
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