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My best birthday gift that i received is a boxed gift package. When I was in high school, my friends put snacks, letters and any other i liked in the huge box. When I went to school, it was on my desk. It is not expensive but i was very impressed. It still remains good memory for me.
*PS-I hope you get better soon.
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Good morning Ye In!
Yes, I\'m doing fine now :)
Thank you for your concern and your effort.
I always appreciate it.
My best birthday gift that i received is a boxed gift package.
>>> The best birthday gift I\'ve ever received is a wrapped package.
When I was in high school, my friends put snacks, letters and any other i liked in the huge box.
>>> When I was in high school, my friends put snacks, letters, and my favorite things in a huge box.
When I went to school, it was on my desk.
>>> CORRECT!
It is not expensive, but I was very impressed.
>>> CORRECT!
It still remains good memory for me.
>>> It still remains a good memory for me.
*PS-I hope you get better soon.
>>> CORRECT!
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