homework
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What is your favorite English movie and why?
- My favorite English movie is a \"Harry Potter\" series. Because I can experience magical world when I\'m watching this movie. When I first watched the movie, I was surprised at visual effects. I was so amazing experience for me. Because I didn\'t have seen something like that.
So I sometimes watch the movie, When I suddenly think of that.
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Hi [이름]:)
Harry Potter can be considered as a classic already. A lot of people love it up to this day. It\'s a blockbuster movie. :)
My favorite English movie is a \"Harry Potter\" series.
>> My favorite English movie is the \"Harry Potter\" series.
Because I can experience magical world when I\'m watching this movie.
>> It is because I can experience a magical world when I watch this.
When I first watched the movie, I was surprised at visual effects.
>> When I fist watched it, I was surprised with the visual effects.
I was so amazing experience for me. Because I didn\'t have seen something like that.
>> I was so amazed with the experience because I haven\'t seen anything like it.
So I sometimes watch the movie, When I suddenly think of that.
>> So I sometimes watch the movie, when I suddenly think of it.
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