Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your biggest goal in life?
How do you plan to achieve that goal?
I think it is a going to art high school.
I practiced playing the piano and make a song everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ji [이름]!
Very good effort today! Thanks for your time in making your homework. See you in our next class.
~~Teacher Kate
>>I think it is going to art high school.
I practiced playing the piano and make a song everyday.
I practiced playing the piano and make a song everyday.
>>I practice playing the piano and making songs everyday.
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