Homework
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Do you feel there is a change in attitude to how people treat same-sex marriages in your country?
Since the internet has got developed, many people could get more information and could easily join a discussion.
I think nowaday lots of young people are open minded, and also open minded about their sexuality. Most of them know they have to respect the diversity. And they start to actively convince people who don’t understand the same-sex marriages on the internet.
Maybe the perception of same-sex marriages come to little different from my parents generation. And I like that change.
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Since the internet has got developed, many people could get more information and could easily join a discussion.
>>> Since the internet has got developed, many people could get more information and easily join a discussion.
I think nowaday lots of young people are open minded, and also open minded about their sexuality.
I think nowaday lots of young people are open minded, and also open minded about their sexuality.
>>> I think nowadays, lots of young people are open minded with other\'s and their own sexuality.
Most of them know they have to respect the diversity.
>>> Correct!
And they start to actively convince people who don’t understand the same-sex marriages on the internet.
>>> Correct!
Maybe the perception of same-sex marriages come to little different from my parents generation. And I like that change.
>>> Correct!
Maybe the perception of same-sex marriages come to little different from my parents generation. And I like that change.
>>> Correct!
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