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I looked for the wagyu. It oriented in Japan. Wagyu is a lot lot of fat. I haven\'t been eating meat. But it\'s not my favorite meat. Because I don\'t like a lot of fat.
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Hello Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Yeah, according to many Koreans, Wagyu is delicious but unhealthy. Did you know that \"Wagyu\" is one of the mot expensive meat in the world? - Oh I am just giving an information ^^
Aki~
I looked for the wagyu.
>>> I looked for Wagyu on the internet.
It oriented in Japan.
>>> It originated in Japan.
Wagyu is a lot lot of fat.
>>> Wagyu has a lot of fat.
>>> Wagyu is full of fats.
I haven\'t been eating meat.
>>> Correct!
But it\'s not my favorite meat.
>>> And it won\'t be my favorite meat.
Because I don\'t like a lot of fat.
>>> Because I don\'t like fatty meat.
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