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2022-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

In fact, I\'m full because I just had dinner, but if I have to choose two foods I crave to eat, I want to choose chocolate and ice cream. Because I want to eat sweets now.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jessica!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


In fact, I\'m full because I just had dinner, 

>> The fact is I\'m full now because I just had dinner.

but if I have to choose two foods I crave to eat, I want to choose chocolate and ice cream.

>> But if I have to choose two foods I\'m craving to eat, I would choose chocolate and ice cream.

Because I want to eat sweets now.

>> This is because I want to eat sweets now.

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