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\"Do not be afraid of getting old, because not all people experience this\"
I totally agree with this opinion.
I think being afraid of getting old is not an weird thing. Cause we all have a little scare of dying.
But as he said, leaving the world in a right time is not a chance for everyone. We should cherish the present, and enjoy the life.
It’s the best way we can get free from death and regret.
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Jane!
I hope you had a blastful weekend! It\'s great to read your view about this matter. Always find time to write and express your thoughts :)
Talk with you tomorrow :)
Aki~
I totally agree with this opinion.
>>> Correct!
I think being afraid of getting old is not an weird thing. Cause we all have a little scare of dying.
>>> I think being afraid of getting old is not a weird thing because we all have a little scare of dying.
But as he said, leaving the world in a right time is not a chance for everyone. We should cherish the present, and enjoy the life.
>>> But as he said, leaving the world at a right time is not a chance for everyone. We should cherish the present, and enjoy life.
It’s the best way we can get free from death and regret.
>>> Correct!
or >>> It’s the best way we can get free from the fear of death and regret.
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