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How do you handle rude phone calls?
When I receive rude phone calls, I try to remain calm and handle them rationally.
While I listen to their talking over the phone, I figure out what has made them being rude,
Then I try to make them relaxed and explain the reason of the situation and give solutions.
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Hello Bo Mi!
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Aki~
When I receive rude phone calls, I try to remain calm and handle them rationally.
>>> Correct!
While I listen to their talking over the phone, I figure out what has made them being rude,
>>> While I listen to them talking on the phone, I figured out what has made them rude
Then I try to make them relaxed and explain the reason of the situation and give solutions.
Then I try to make them relaxed and explain the reason of the situation and give solutions.
>>> Then I try to make them relaxed and explain the reason of the situation and give some solutions.
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