Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
My hobby is playing fluit, but I cann\'t play it these days. Because I was busy doing something days.
I am into transcribing English Bible. Now I think I better play flute regularly.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [Name] [이름]!
I am into transcribing English Bible. Now I think I better play flute regularly.
What a great day to start the day. Thank you for letting me read your thoughts. I think doing a hobby breaks the boredom of our lives. Keep playing the flute because it\'s good for your soul ^^
Aki~
My hobby is playing fluit, but I cann\'t play it these days. Because I was busy doing something days.
>>> My hobby is playing the flute but I can\'t play these days because I am busy doing something.
I am into transcribing English Bible. Now I think I better play flute regularly.
>>> I am transcribing the English bible. Now I think I have to play the flute regularly.
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