HOMEWORK

2022-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: ESSAY QUESTION: What country has the most interesting customs? ANSWER : My most interesting customs is north Europe Christmas Because i can experience the old traditional Christmas festival. What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling alone? ANSWER : I don\'t think traveling alone has any advantages. Disadvantages is that when I am very bored and lost at the airport, I have to solve everything by myself.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Bob! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


My most interesting customs is north Europe Christmas
>>> The most interesting custom is northern Europe\'s Christmas.

Because i can experience the old traditional Christmas festival.
>>> Because I can experience the old traditional Christmas festival.


I don\'t think traveling alone has any advantages.
>>> CORRECT!

Disadvantages is that when I am very bored and lost at the airport, I have to solve everything by myself.
>>> The disadvantage is that when I am very bored and lost at the airport, I have to solve everything by myself.

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