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I like my family to eat or worship together. But My children want to with us( I and my husband) traveling.
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Great day Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Oh, your children are the sweetest ^^ They would love you to enjoy seeing the best thing that this world could offer.
Thanks for sharing.
Aki~
I like my family to eat or worship together. But My children want to with us( I and my husband) traveling.
>>> I like my family to eat or worship together. But my children want traveling with us.
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