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2022-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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South Korea is about to approve vaccinating children ages 5-11. What is your opinion about this? Is it a good thing or a bad thing? I think It is not a good idea. Because there are many side effects after vaccination. And children age 5-11 are weaker than older people. So I think it\'s better to follow the quarantine rules than to get a vaccine.

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Hi [이름]!

You have a point there. Although vaccination is important, we still need to be very mindful of the side effects so we have to consult a doctor first. :)

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I think It is not a good idea.

>>I think it is not a good idea because there are many side effect after vaccination.

Because there are many side effects after vaccination.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

And children age 5-11 are weaker than older people.

>> And children ages 5-11 are weaker than older people.

So I think it\'s better to follow the quarantine rules than to get a vaccine.

>> CORRECT

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