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My favorite photo is Jeju-Island sea photo. I went to Jeju with my friend 2years ago,. Although the weather was bad, maybe that\'s why I remember it. While the umbrella turned upside down in the rain, I took a picture. When I saw that photo, it reminds me of that time.
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My favorite photo is Jeju-Island sea photo.
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I went to Jeju with my friend 2years ago,.
>>> I went to Jeju with my friend 2 years ago.
Although the weather was bad, maybe that\'s why I remember it.
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While the umbrella turned upside down in the rain, I took a picture.
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When I saw that photo, it reminds me of that time.
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OR: That picture reminds me of that time.
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