Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I was born in Dangjin.
This place have beach and mountain.
So you can eat fresh fishes and hiking the mountain.
And the air is fresh in the countryside.
But I don\'t live there, so I don\'t know well.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. Keep on practicing English. ^_^
~T. Maine
I was born in Dangjin.
>>Correct.
This place have beach and mountain.
>>This place has beaches and mountains.
So you can eat fresh fishes and hiking the mountain.
>>So you can eat fresh fish and hike in the mountains.
And the air is fresh in the countryside.
>>Correct.
But I don\'t live there, so I don\'t know well.
>>Correct.
>>OR: However, I am not staying there so I can\'t tell you more.
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