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I only liked in church activities. Then, I got married without working . I don\'t remember having fun with other activities.
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Hello there Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Doing something that you like matters. it may not be a grand as others but finding something you enjoy is worth it. Thanks for sharing!
Aki~
I only liked in church activities. Then, I got married without working . I don\'t remember having fun with other activities.
>>> I only liked church activities. Then I got married without working. I don\'t remember having fun doing some activities
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