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2012-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello, Ms. [Name]. It's Friday and this is my homework. 1. The acronym FIFA (stands for) Federation Interationale de Football Association. 2. FIFA (was founded) in Paris on may 21st, 1904. 3. The FIFA World Cup is the (world's Largest) single-sport event. 4. Except during the war years, the World Cup event (took place) every four years since 1930. 5. (No others) sports event of the modern era has the popularity of the Worl Cup. 6. The first World Cup (was held) in Uruguay in 1930. 7. Jules Rimet, the third president of FIFA, takes the credit (of) the idea of (gather) the world's best national football teams to decide the world champions. 8. In the 15 tournaments (to date), only six countries have become the world champion: Brazil, Germany, Italy, Argentina, Uruguay and England. 9. In 1994, Brazil became the cup-holder (for) the (fourth) time. 10. There had been two World Cup trophies in the 65-year history of the tournaments. Thank you so much.

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Hello there, Sir Steve! Thank you for your composition today! You\'re back and I\'m glad. Take care and have a great time! I\'ll talk with you later. T. JanE ^^ Hello, Ms. [Name].>> Correct.It\'s Friday and this is my homework.>> Correct.1. The acronym FIFA (stands for) Federation Interationale de Football Association.>> Correct.2. FIFA (was founded) in Paris on may 21st, 1904.>> Correct.3. The FIFA World Cup is the (world\'s Largest) single-sport event.>> Correct.4. Except during the war years, the World Cup event (took place) every four years since 1930.>> Except during the war years, the World Cup event has taken place every four years since 1930.5. (No others) sports event of the modern era has the popularity of the Worl Cup.>> No other sports event of the modern era has won the popularity of the World Cup.6. The first World Cup (was held) in Uruguay in 1930.>> Correct.7. Jules Rimet, the third president of FIFA, takes the credit (of) the idea of (gather) the world\'s best national football teams to decide the world champions.>> Jules Rimet, the third president of FIFA, takes the credit for the idea of gathering the world\'s best national football teams to decide the world champions.8. In the 15 tournaments (to date), only six countries have become the world champion: Brazil, Germany, Italy, Argentina, Uruguay and England.>> Correct.9. In 1994, Brazil became the cup-holder (for) the (fourth) time.>> Correct.10. There had been two World Cup trophies in the 65-year history of the tournaments.>> There have been two World Cup trophies in the 65-year history of the tournaments.Thank you so much. >> Correct.

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