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I want to travel to Switzerland. Switzerland has a very beautiful scenery,fresh air and nature. In Korea, it is hard to see clear sky because of fine dusk. And I heard Switzerland is pretty safe. Also, Switzerland has a lot of cafe. I want to drink coffee at peaceful cafe looking lake and snow scene. I will work hard to go Switzerland!
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Good day, Ye In! You have a clear imagination of the things you want to enjoy in Switzerland! I hope you enjoy your trip there someday!-Faith-
I want to travel to Switzerland.
>> I want to travel to Switzerland.
OR My next trip will be in Switzerland.
Switzerland has a very beautiful scenery,fresh air and nature.
>> Switzerland has a very beautiful scenery, fresh air and nature.
In Korea, it is hard to see clear sky because of fine dusk.
>> In Korea, it is hard to see a clear sky because of fine dust.
And I heard Switzerland is pretty safe.
>> CORRECT
Also, Switzerland has a lot of cafe.
>> Also, Switzerland has a lot of cafes.
I want to drink coffee at peaceful cafe looking lake and snow scene.
>> I want to drink coffee in a peaceful cafe while looking at a lake and a snow scenery.
I will work hard to go Switzerland!
>> I will work hard to go to Switzerland!
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