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I thin when I was young very passive and shy.
It is similar now but more shy when I was young.
And I want to change my first middle school.
When I was first middle school too boring and study hard.
So I transferred second middle school it is very nice.
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
Check your spelling when making your homework. And could you tell me more about your middle school experience in class? Have a great day! ^^
~T. Maine
I thin when I was young very passive and shy.
>>I think when I was young I was very passive and shy.
It is similar now but more shy when I was young.
>>It is similar now, but I am more shy when I was younger.
And I want to change my first middle school.
>>And I want to change my middle school experience.
When I was first middle school too boring and study hard.
>>When I was in my first middle school, it was too boring and studying was hard.
So I transferred second middle school it is very nice.
>>So I transferred to a second middle school and it was nice.
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